Advertisements
Advertisements
Question
You are Zac Skaria, a resident of # 412, Magna Greens Apartments, Gandhi Marg, Jonpara, Mumbai. Three students of grade 10 from your residential complex have rescued and rehabilitated a few old beggars from the neighborhood. You think that their work deserves appreciation and recognition. Write a letter to the President of the RWA, seeking recommendation for these youth, to be nominated for ‘Serving Citizens’ Award’.Suggest other ways such acts of kindness could be recognised and awarded in the future.
Advertisements
Solution
# 412, Magna Greens Apartments,
Gandhi Marg, Jonpara,
Mumbai
10th August 2021
The President
RWA, Magna Greens Apartments,
Mumbai.
Subject: Nomination for Serving Citizens Award
Dear Madam,
I am writing to nominate three students of our residential complex for the prestigious Serving Citizens Award instituted by RWA. These three grade 10 students that I am nominating live in our apartment complex. Last week, they rescued and rehabilitated a few old beggars living in our neighbourhood. Their kind act not only made a difference in the lives of these poor beggars, but also inspired other children and adults of our locality to engage in similar acts of compassion.
Therefore, I would like to nominate their names for the 'Serving Citizens Award’ and believe that they are truly worthy of it... Please be kind enough to take this appeal forward. I will be highly obliged and grateful.
Thanking You
Yours sincerely,
Zac Skaria
Notes
Marking Scheme
FORMAT – 1 mark
NOTE - full credit if all aspects are included. Partial credit (½ mark) if one-two aspects are missing. No credit if more than two aspects are missing.
Note for given descriptors - Dedicated marks at a level are to be awarded only if ALL descriptors match. If one or more descriptors do not match, the marks are awarded at a level lower.
CONTENT - 2 marks
- 2 marks
- All points included
- Well-developed with sustained clarity
- 1½ marks
- Almost all points incorporated
- Reasonably well-developed
- 1 mark
- Some points incorporated
- Fair attempt at developing ideas with some impact on clarity of response
- ½ mark
- Most of the points of the given task not incorporated
- Limited awareness of task development
ORGANISATION OF IDEAS - 1 mark
1 mark - Consistent with a frequent display of the listed parameters.
- Highly effective style capable of conveying the ideas convincingly with appropriate layout of a formal letter viz. addresses, salutation, subscription, and ending
- Carefully structured content with organised paragraphing presented cohesively.
- Highly effective register (formal tone, tense, and vocabulary), relevant and appropriate sentences for conveying the ideas precisely and effectively.
½ mark - Limited display of listed parameters.
- Inconsistent style, expression sometimes awkward, layout barely accurate.
- Poor sequencing of ideas; often sporadically clear and related to the given topic in an attempt to maintain a general overall cohesion. Displays disjointed portions, exhibiting a lack of coherence of ideas.
- Range of vocabulary is limited but manages to convey, largely, the overall meaning and the purpose of the writing. A large portion of vocabulary copied from question.
ACCURACY - 1 mark
1 mark
- Spelling, punctuation and grammar consistently/largely accurate, with occasional minor errors, that do not impede communication.
½ mark
- Spelling, punctuation and grammar display some errors spread across, causing minor impediments to the message communicated.
No credit
- Frequent errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar, impeding communication.
APPEARS IN
RELATED QUESTIONS
A1. Letter writing (5 marks)
Look at the notice issued by the supervisor of your school.
Picnic To Lonavale
- Contribution Rs 500.
- Spots to be visited: Wax Museum, Narayanidham, Dams, Duke's Nose
- Enjoy scenic beauty, pleasant weather.
- Need to carry: Water bottle, proper clothing, caps, essential medicines, snacks for your taste.
- Start: 7.30 a.m. from school
- Return: 9.30 p.m. to school.
You stay in a Hostel. Write a letter to your daddy asking for permission to go for the picnic. Also, request him to give you the necessary amount.
OR
A2. 30% Water cut
Mumbai: Due to major repairs of pipeline in Dadar and nearby areas, 30% water cut will be implemented fur G(N) and (S). Citizens are requested to use water carefully and store water for a day. Water supply will resume on Sunday night. Do not panic.
Write a letter to the Secretary of your Housing Society informing him about the news and drawing his attention to the problem. Request him to take the necessary steps
You are Navtej/Navita, Secretary, Environment Club, Akash Public School, Agra. You, along with a group of students, went on a 3-day tour through Corbett National Park. You found how the tourists abuse the available facilities and thus endanger the environment. Write a letter in 120-150 words to the editor of a national daily highlighting the situation. Suggest ways through which the environment of the Park can be saved.
Write a letter to the manager of your local bus depot pointing out that there are very few buses on your route in the morning and these are invariably late, thereby causing inconvenience to many junior college students and other passengers.
Read the following news and write a letter based on it.
| State lost more than 2100 sq. km. of forest area in past 2 decades Nagpur, Dec. 26 : Maharashtra has lost a staggering 2116 sq. km. of forest area or an equivalent of three Tadoba forest reserves in the span of two decades, reveals a report tracking climate change in India released recently by the Ministry of Statistics and Programme Implementation. |
| Informal Letter : You are Pritesh/Preeti Desai, staying at 1/17, Gharkul, P.K. Road, Meher Colony, Nagpur. Write a letter to your uncle giving your views about the conservation of forest. |
While reading a magazine advertising home products, Sakshi Aggarwal came across an advertisement for a stain remover called Dr. Clean. She decided to buy the product but it caused more harm than good. Complete the letter of complaint she writes to the company using appropriate words.
Dear Sir
I wish____________ to your notice the ridiculous product you have recently launched. I saw a TV advertisement for Dr. Clean and its ability _______ '99 top stains'. I bought the product and _________the least, I regret the money I spent on it.
You claim that your Dr Clean stain removal keeps clothes in wearable condition for a long time and thus helps reduce clothing costs. However, let me tell you what happened when I tried _________a stain left by tea from my shirt. _________the stain remover on the stain does seem to make the stain
fainter temporarily. But here is the problem: a little after you have sprayed Dr. Clean on the fabric, the area around the stain seems to melt away. Soon, there is no stain. In fact, there is a hole where the stain was!
Surely this is NOT what you meant when you advertised The stain will no longer be visible to the naked eye?
Yours truly
A Disillusioned Customer
You visited remote area in Himachal Pradesh and observed that people have to travel long distances to get clean and safe drinking water. Write a letter in - 120 words to the Editor, Himachal Times expressing your concern about the situation and requesting the authorities to take appropriate measures to deal with the problem. You are Rama/Krishna, 112 Mall Road, Delhi.
Letter Writing
Imagine that you are Manish/Manish Godbole, a student of class XI science stream, Adarsh College, Omeraga, Distt. Osmanabad. You have secured 85% marks in S.S.C. exam. You are eligible to get Rajarshi Shahu scholarship.
Write a letter to the District Welfare officer, special assistance cell, Osmanabad, requesting him/her to make necessary proceedings for the allotment of Rajarshi Shahu Scholarship.
You are the college representative and your Principal has assigned you the task of writing a letter to the Divisional Officer, Satpuda Mountain Ranges, Nagpur, seeking permission for the mountaineering expedition to be organized by your college.
Write a letter to your father requesting him to attend the social and cultural gathering of your school. Take help of the points given below.
- Social and cultural gathering a mega event.
- Varieties of activities conducted in the gathering.
- Your participation in two or three activities.
- Need to boost your confidence.
Imagine that your school needs some Scientific equipments, apparatus, and formulae charts for the laboratory. Being the in- charge of Science Committee, write a letter to the Headmaster of your school suggesting him some Scientific equipments and apparatus required for Standard X Science practicals. Take help of the information given below to complete your letter.
|
Sanjay Sharma To __________________ __________________ Sub : __________________ Sir/Madam, - various experiments included in Standard X syllabus Thank you, __________________ __________________ |
Write a letter to your friend describing your ancestral house.
‘Imagine you are Rohit/ Richa residing at, Sainik Colony, Pune 411051.’
‘Science Exhibition’
Informal Letter
Write a letter to your friend Anup/ Anita describing him/her about the Prize won by the group in the Science Exhibition.
Imagine you are Rohan/Rima residing at 225, Veerchakra Colony, Kolhapur, 416002 “Hima Das the Indian Sprinter won 5 Golds in one month”
| Formal Letter |
| Write a letter to the Education Officer, Kolhapur appealing to him to inculcate the importance of sports by providing basic sports facilities to schools. |
Write a letter to AZ Company requesting them to replace the defective juicer that you bought recently. Include the following details: the problem, date of purchase, receipt number, model and warranty
Imagine you are Anandi/Anand Jadhav. You have read the following advertisement and write the following letter.
|
Enchanting Beauty: Chikhaldara Enjoy the famous hill points and natural beauty. A living paradise on earth-
- Contact - The Incharge, Tourism Department, Chikhaldara, |
Look at the advertisement. Write a letter to The Officer Incharge, Tourism Department, Chikhaldara asking for:
- Concession in entry fees.
- Accommodation details
- Food facility and provision for online booking.
Mr. and Mrs. Agarwal of Pushp Farms, Kolkata, are hosting a party on the occasion of the twenty-first birthday of their daughter, Vinita. Write a letter of invitation to Sonakshi, their niece, giving details of the date, time and venue in about 50 words.
Write a letter to your friend describing the details of the vacation.
Write a letter to the curator of the museum seeking permission for a school visit.
In your locality, dirty gutters are overflowing. It has made the hygienic conditions of the area very poor. Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper bringing to the notice of the public the above-mentioned matter and its harmful effects. Suggest some possible solutions.
