Question

Read the following conversation:

Malavika and Deepak are looking through some photographs of Malavika’s family.

Malavika:	Now ... this is my brother Shantanu. Shantanu is in Class VIII. Shantanu is brilliant at playing tennis. Shantanu is also good at singing. Shantanu sings a lot.
Deepak:	Shantanu sounds interesting. I’d like to meet Shantanu. I’m looking for someone to play tennis with.
Malavika:	Well ... why don’t you come around tonight and meet Shantanu? My parents will be out. My parents always go out on Tuesdays.

Improve the above conversation by using suitable pronouns where required.

Answer 1

Malavika:	Now ... this is my brother Shantanu. He is in Class VIII. He is brilliant at playing tennis. He is also good at singing. He sings a lot.
Deepak:	He sounds interesting. I’d like to meet him. I’m looking for someone to play tennis with.
Malavika:	Well ... why don’t you come around tonight and meet him? My parents will be out. They always go out on Tuesdays.